Well I went to your site, read chapters 1&2 and half of 3, so far I think its full of high school drama’s. Very interesting stuff, a few mis spelling, but hey it’s just a rough draft, and more narration. Dialogue is a good things but equal amount of the both things is even better, I couldn’t read the whole thing right now but I won’t hessitate to read it latter, Don’t give up, peace out, Niki 😉